She is calm
beneath the storm
Lazuline lush
and drowning pools
I wade through her:
Infant.
Unsure.
Reborn,
A child unto her-
Seeking solace
beyond her blue.
Author notes
I love to swim- it makes me feel at ease and connected. I find it therapeutic.
Wrote this one in my head while I was in the local pool today- wanted to express how I feel in the water.
Catching thoughts like butterflies.
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lovely
Impromtu writes are delicous; spontaneous as though words are coming from a pure connection of body and mind; feelings....thoughts, impulse....desire...the poetry flows and you have something very special!
wondeful insight into 'you'.
Darmok
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faded
As a number of others have commented the meaning of this poem is not completely obvious except to the writer but it is still good.
Mysterious Ways Lyrics (U2)
U2 - Mysterious Ways Lyrics
Johnny take a walk with your sister the moon
Let her pale light in to fill up your room
You've been living underground
Eating from a can
You've been running away
From what you don't understand...
Love
She's slippy
You're sliding down
She'll be there when you hit the ground
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
She moves in mysterious ways
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
She moves in mysterious ways
Johnny take a dive with your sister in the rain
Let her talk about the things you can't explain
To touch is to heal
To hurt is to steal
If you want to kiss the sky
Better learn how to kneel
(on your knees boy)
She's the wave
She turns the tide
She sees the man inside the child
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
She moves in mysterious ways
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
She moves in mysterious ways
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
Lift my days, light up my nights
One day you will look...back
And you'll see...where
You were held...how
By this love...while
You could stand...there
You could move on this moment
Follow this feeling
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
She moves in mysterious ways
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
She moves in mysterious ways
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
We move through miracle days
Spirit moves in mysterious ways
She moves with it
She moves with it
Lift my days, light up my nights
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I thought this was a verry good poem. It's a little hard to understand what you are talking about. But I think you are writing about Mother Nature/the Earth. But great poem. What I like most about it is the wording and how you make me wonder and keep guessing what it's about. what made you think of writing this type of poem? Good Job!!!
Cheesey
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I think it sounds like you could be talking about your mother, but I like the way this sounds....very heartfelt response.
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I think you are talking about someone giving their life to Christ. Great write.
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crap
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Beautiful words well written Enjoyed the read
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