I look out to the ocean, and there I see,
A boat out there, just waiting for me.
I sing a song before I leave.
Tweedle dum, tweedle dee, come follow me.
Beneath the waves, to the ocean's caves.
I step onto the dock, and there I see,
Up close, that boat, just waiting for me.
I step onto the boat, and then I say,
"Goodbye USA I'll be back someday."
A contest entry
- Life Is Beautiful. [Eight Options.] by La Tua Cantante.
545 points, ended March 12, 2008, 29 entries
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Comments
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interesting.. i like it though. especially the part about the ocean, i love the ocean....lol well thankyou for entering my contest and good luck!
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Aww.
This is very short and sweet.
I can actually see the ocean.
I wish I was there though,
because it's really cold here.
O.o.
My favorite part is:
"Beneath the waves, to the ocean's caves.
I step onto the dock, and there I see,
Up close, that boat, just waiting for me."
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