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The love I have

Won't you sit and stay by my side
Please don't run and hide
I love you so
So please don't go
Please don't break my heart into two
All I want is you
There will be no other
I am yours forever
My life and world belongs to you
So let our hearts renew
Renew into one our hearts will be
Our love makes me drop to my knee
My heart and soul will always be your
For all eternity

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  • cindy4
    September 22, 2008
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    Such a good write


    • Crystal Ellens
      September 23, 2008
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      Cindy4

      Thank you so much for your comment it is highly appreciated.

  • Matthew-Parry
    February 7, 2008

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    Good writing here! This poem evokes emotions of love and companionship. A love so strong, that it brings you to your knees with a longing for eternal togetherness! Love and compassion have alot of lessons be experienced and learned. I thoroughly enjoyed this write!

    Keep Up The Good Work!!!

    Matthew


    • Crystal Ellens
      February 19, 2008
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      Thank you Mathew-Parry,

      I am glad you enjoyed it. Your comment is highly appreciated. Your comment means a hole lot to me.