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Kisses

Each night before you go to bed
Look to the sky and you'll see
A million stars which are kisses
Sent to you from me

And as I go to bed each night
I'd like to think it's true
That all the stars up in the sky
Are kisses sent from you

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  • nice write, short but sweet, I like it, hope all is well


  • trekkergirl
    October 26, 2008

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    wow this is such a short little poem but it truly touched me. I really love reading it over and over again. Thanks for sharing this lovely write with us and thanks for entering it into my contest!


  • Peachy
    October 3, 2008
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    I still love it, soooo much!
    Thanks for entering!


  • thepoetsings
    August 4, 2008
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    First of all, please pick a trophy to upgrade to and stick that in your AN. Thanks.

    Very sweet poem, if a bit corny. But since I just started dating a guy, I can handle a little bit. Kudos for creating a fairly unique perspective on the night sky. Thank you for entering and for sharing!

  • Peachy
    July 17, 2008
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    Short and sweet, yayness!
    I love it; so cute!
    Thanks for entering!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • InLove
    June 11, 2008
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    So sweet


  • HerbalGoat
    May 25, 2008
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    It's short, adn sweet, and I love it, there really is not much more to say :-)


  • Pollycheck
    May 16, 2008

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    Thyank you for entering my short poems contest. this is a very sweet poem. It is one that makes you say "awwww".


  • TheDemonEve
    May 9, 2008

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    Awww!!! The emotion is this is so pure and sweet, and all is said in so few words. Wonderfully done!

    Best of luck and thanks for entering!


  • GypsyEyes
    April 18, 2008

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    i like kisses!!! this is just a sweet poem! lovely! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    April 10, 2008
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    A good way of seeing the meaing of kisses which are limitless as you said--like the stars above.


  • Blooming Poet
    April 4, 2008
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    Kisses and stars relate so well in this little poem. Great use of words for such a short length of poem. Loved this part: And as I go to bed each night I'd like to think it's true That all the stars up in the sky Are kisses sent from you


  • B Chandler
    March 20, 2008
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    I have to agree with leander in saying that this is indeed very lovely and romantic


  • leander Moderators member
    December 4, 2007

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    Well this is quite a romantic and tender poem that you've written here I like the catchy rhythm that's in there - very well done!

    Thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck!
    Leander

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