True love is just a fairy tale.
Who would believe it's true?
Falling in love at first sight,
that sounds absurd!
And happily ever after,
what is that?
Yes, those are questions asked
by people who have never truly loved.
Cinderella stories, they can be real
but only if you know how to give your heart.
But you have to give it freely and fall into the unknown.
If you don't you will never experience it.
We have that!
A love that will test time.
Beautiful and full of life are we.
Living our own little fairy tale.
Waking up with each other every morning
And holding one another until we are forced to get up.
Why don't people believe in true love
and fairy tales?
The world would be a happier place.
Love like ours would take the place of war.
Love like ours is something people
wish on a shooting star for.
But our love is not without disagreements.
No, that would not be true to say so.
Even fairy tale princes and princesses
had their share of fights.
But our true love is like theirs,
not letting disagreements get in the way.
We breathe each other in,
our love gives us a high no drug could.
But because it's what's called true love
not many believe we are so happy.
Now that my friends is ridiculous!
Why can't we be?
Oh, yeah, true love is a fairy tale.
Forgot you don't believe.
I feel sorry for those who don't,
they will never be like us.
They will live a fake happy life
and say that it's true love.
Author notes
notebook love
i don't know where this went or even if it's what you guys want! if not feel free to remove it
leslielovesthomas - teenagefailure
"forget the freak, you're just nature", leslielovesthomas option #3 Ever After
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beautiful
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your voice definitely comes through in this write and I like that.
I understand where you're coming from and I appreciate it.
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What a gem you have captured here within your words. Anyone blessed enough to have this should be thankful everyday. Best of luck in the contest. Cathy
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thats wonderful
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"They will live a fake happy life
and say that it's true love."
Love it....a lot of thought was put into the poem from beginning to end - great job! Good luck! -
There is so much truth to this poem, thats why I like it so much. Love is very much like a drug and its addictive as well
I think you did a great job with this and thank you for entering
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you're title is my motto, this is a lovely poem & very true
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