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Loss

Sorrow lingers within the glade,
enveloped by the swirling mists.
They confine the spirit to mourning.

A contest entry

Shoot, I have a good doctor

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  • Venugopal gold member
    October 26, 2007

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    A nice three liner. "What is common to every one is sorrow" said Great Budha.Good luck in the contest.


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 25, 2007

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    The words and images are so good this poem makes me sad, but in a good way because we all have had a lost and your poem is very beautiful! Good luck in the contest!