MY LOVE
He rides down from the mountains
On a steed so fine and strong
He looks so noble and dashing
Ladies swoon as he strides along
But he only rides to be by my side
For the time has been much too long
Since we last shared our passion
But this night, to us, will belong
As he dismounts his faithful steed
Approaching, lifts me off the ground
Taking me in his strong, loving arms
And twirling me all around
We share a love so strong, eternal
No sweeter man could there be found
For me there would be no other
My heart to him, forever bound
He carries me to our chamber
Gently placing me on the bed
I can see a glimmer in his eyes
Sweet thoughts racing through my head
His absence had felt like forever
Now the loneliness that was, has fled
For this night will be spent together
Filled with passionate love instead
The candlelight dances upon the walls
As he gently brushes his lips on mine
I feel his soft touch upon my breast
A sensation so sweetly divine
He slowly descends to lay by my side
Our bodies and souls entwine
In sweet embrace, I look into his face
And know everything now, will be fine
~PennyLynne~
Author notes
Written September 15th, 2001
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Penny you offer here your expression of what love is. The sharing and caring for another, during the art of union. This is a clean and wholesome use of given words, so beautifully done. Thank you -tj-
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Well I haven't read this so I will comment wether I had or not
A beautiful write so well thought out think we all wish our prince would come on his steed and carry us a way..beautiful write.
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don't touch it!
Wow! I felt that one!! So well done for all who have loved and lived a romantic fantasy like that. To see it as such is a beautiful touch! Great poem my friend! -
thank you Damon, that is so nice to know :) glad you liked this.. thank you for taking the time to view :)
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Perfectly wonderfully romantic. Some men like to read romantic poetry too. I like it a lot. -
Thank you Karen, what a sweet thing to say :) Actually, I do have one in the works. I may never be published, but it's a labor of love...thank you for your most wonderful comment, I do appreciate it so very much :))
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Wow!!!! Rubee, this sooooooooo AWESOME!!! Could easily have been a page from a romance novel:) You should write one, you have the gift:)
Karen -
Barbara Cartland? I'm sorry, I'm not familiar with the name.. I hope you can enlighten me on that LOL...thanx so much for your kind words dottie...so much appreciated :)
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excellent
ARe you really Barbara Cartland??? how pure and sweet -
thank you Sector, that is so kind of you to say :) much appreciated :))
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I love romance this is sweet and had a hot touch to it I liked it a lot -
thank you for your kind words on this piece Henri..it's very much appreciated :) this is one of the first poems I wrote after a very long absense from writing :)
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Ahhh consumated love, especially afteran absence is absolutely divine. Great read.
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aww thank you Pauline, for your very kind words on this piece and for always taking the time to stop by...always appreciated :))
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wow Rubee this just so romantic just beauty of true love you bring forth such beauty in your poems :)pjs -
Thank you Sammy, that's so sweet of you to say :)) and I appreciated every one of your visits and comments to that one :)) Thank you for your wonderful comment on this one too :))
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Beautifully romantic Rubee ... *sighing*
(But my all time favourite of yours is 'Conquistador') *smile*
Hugs
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awww thank you so much Emberly...you are such a sweetie :)) thank you for reading it yet again :))
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Well even though I did already leave a comment on this. I really loved reading this, so I have to leave another one :o) You did a beautiful job writing this, very fairytale like.
Nice work!
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thank you for your very kind comment smiley :)) it's much appreciated :))
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this was a beautiful love poem. thanks for sharing -
LOL Gayla...sorry, was just reading your edit LOL Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I appreciate you taking the time to read this...thanx so much :))
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Thank you so much Penny :))) I'm glad you liked this one. I have about 3 that are very dear to me, this is one of them. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I really do appreciate it very much :))
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Thank you so much for stopping by and for your very kind comment NurseChilly...I will be by to view your work very soon :)
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Oh Penny, this is so beautiful! So much passion and warmth in this and the flow was wonderful. ~Gayla~
forgot the verdict - 'Don't Touch It'
Edited by Smiling Eyes on right now because 'I think my head must be somewhere else today ;)'. -
Thank you Elyse :)) and sorry about that, but it wasn't showing on the bottom of my list of poems, so thought I'd repost. My bottom poems were chopped off but it seems ok now. But thank you again for your lovely comment :)))
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hmmmmmmmmm......how could i miss this one?????? i was sure i've read all your poems!!!!! sorry Penny!!!!!!
i love the tenderness in this poem!!!!!! believe me, i understand!!!!!!!! HUGS!!!!!!! -
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Soft and sensual,beautifully written..i like it very much.~CHILLY~ -
thank you so much for your very kind comment alexzs. I appreciate it very much. I will be by to read some of your work as soon as I can :))
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cool-sophisticated-suave-descriptive-something knew-not bad at all
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thank you webdreamer for your very kind comment. I appreciate you taking the time to view my poem ever so much :))
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment bonnie blue :) I appreciate so much that you took the time to view my poem. I will be by soon to read more of your work :)
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Elyse...It sure is LOL Well, it was like this for a little while, I hope it will be again..ya never know LOL Thank you for your very kind words..I'm glad this one touched you :)) I appreciate your wonderful comments (especially knowing what trouble you're having with your computer at the moment..hope it'll be ok very soon)..*hugs* :) -
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very pretty romantic piece, Rubee:) lovely images and story...sigh...:)
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I guess I'm still like a kid, believing in the fairy tale romances LOL Thank you so much for your wonderful comment Dee. I truly appreciate your kind words. I'm glad you liked this one :))
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Oh, this is SO romantic...You write so beautifully, Rubee. This is the kind of romance we all dream of, isn't it.
the flow, the story within this poem is wonderful.
Dee -
Thank you so much shicho. I really appreciate your kind words. I thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read/rate my poem :))
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wowies....i love this, so much emotion has been put into it, it's great.
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Thank you so much tamara for stopping by and for the wonderful comment and rating. I appreciate it very much...you're so kind :))
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gozling, thank you so much for taking the time to read/rate my poem. I apprecite your wonderful comment very much :)) I hope you have your 'someone' soon to flicker in the candlelight :))
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Our bodies and souls entwine
In sweet embrace, I look into his face
And know everything now will be fine...
truly divine the love you define -
OHH sooo romantic!!! *sniffle* I want someone here with me flickering in the candlelight!!!!
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Thank you again Emberly...even at my age I still enjoy the fairytale romances LOL I appreciate that you stopped by to read this...thank you so much :))
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Wow! Very beautiful and loving thoughts! Sounds like a fairytale romance, so divine!
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Thank you BlaZe..I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Thank you too for the kind rating, much appreciated :)
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such a neat and easy flowing piece
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Once again, thank you so much Kathy for your comments. It means a lot when someone else can feel the passion you put into a poem :)
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*crying* and you know why LOL!!! Awesome once again. I know where you have been and can only guess where you are going, but all of your emotions come through very strongly in this poem!!!
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