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you look at me

glittering glory gleams in my eyes-
your blushing beauty beams

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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  • butterflywriter
    October 25, 2007
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    clever, using different alliterative lines

    good luck in the contest...


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 25, 2007
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    so real in the eyes who sees,good luck..mm


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 25, 2007
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    beautiful


  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 25, 2007
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    What a fantastic look, Eh? ten words of bliss, thanks for your entry into my contestlol


  • Faithless Angel
    October 25, 2007
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    aww short and sweet
    i likey,
    best of luck in the contest
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