Feathered fingers
caress curves
in sensual seduction
of playful passions
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A contest entry
- Alliteration Quickie by 2lullabyhaven.
425 points, ended October 26, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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you got my attention
Hardened hammer
really ready
in desiring delemma
of sexy sweeties
rudolf
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Now that gave me a definite case of flutter belly well done and master pece in just a few lines
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is this one of those japanese poems? i love it, it is simple. meant for me lol
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Perfect
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hot hot hot. Nice use of alliteration. Well done. ~Pam
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Girl you just remind me of why I love my name on here so much! Brilliant baby! Just Brilliant! A fine read to send me off thinking about when I get around a bunch of crystals!
All the best in the contest
Much Love & Many Blessings~
~Joy
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great words good luck in the contest
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Yaya, lots of alliterations in this one, thanks for your entry into my contestlol
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Oo la la, short but passionate and very strong. Very nice job and good luck in the contest.
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