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Your Killing Me

In my dreams
I keep telling you
how I feel

In my nightmares
you keep turning me away
without giving me a chance to explain

Boy
your killing me
when you talk to me

And then walk away
without a goodbye
its so painful inside

Quiet as I may be
I still look at you
as you walk by me

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10/25/07 12:46 pm

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  • imperfectperfection
    October 25, 2007
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    wow

    wow hun this is so beautifully sad. your talent is groing to blooming flower that spread it's frgrance painting life with vibrant colors.... I'm so proud of you and this is a masterpiece you've written... heart aches are unfortunate part of our lives... but it only makes us stronger... take care baby... love mom


  • hypnorocker
    October 25, 2007

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    awww....

    so full of emotion, the depth is there, u can feel it... interesting how something so wonderful can be so painful... keep well


  • storiesuntold
    October 25, 2007
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    This is good

    Within the vision of one so loved the heart aches to let him know yet so shy words cant be found