I will always be here
so you can hold me near
I will always stay
and never go away
I will be your smile
when you haven’t had one in a while
I will cry your tear
so you have nothing to fear
I will stay by your side
and never hide
I will want a kiss
and a chance to ill never miss
I will lead your way
on the darkest day
for every moment you will ever see
with you I will be
Author notes
#6 - Vows (Make some up or enter the ones you read.)
A contest entry
- Vows by EeyoreUK.
335 points, ended November 8, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I WANT LOVE!!!!!! by Breaking Inside.
450 points, ended November 9, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me Love by Fixing Tomorrow.
1000 points, ended December 18, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything and Everything To Do With Love, Good or Bad by Blooming Poet.
385 points, ended February 12, 2008, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"I will want a kiss
and a chance to ill never miss"
That sounds kind of awkward.
But other than that, good job! -
Thank you for sharing, best to you in the contest
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This is a great poem.
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I think if you were going to write the vows to describe the love you feel for someone, mind body and soul... you would do much better than this. There is nothing to set this apart from any other boy band love song. You need much more passion and to make it more passionate.
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wow congradulations, you are on the finalist list!!! i loved it that was wonderful!!
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nicely written
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something about this really moves me, well done and thanks for entering
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