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NightMares

A Howling Wind Blows from the East
It awakens the Sleeping beast.
When The Lucifer Takes Over My Sleep
And into dreams the monsters creep.

As the Birds Return to their Nests in fear
As the darkness grows Very Near
The Rising Sun seems far away
While I listen to Satyrs play.

I hear a Sound upon My Bed
But when I look, no one is there.
Evil Laughter Echoes through the Hall
Sounds Like Air But not At all

The Clattering Sound on My window panes
I Dont percieve it as Sound of Rain
Rustling Creatures are merely trees
The shadowy faces only leaves.

I lay My Head again to sleep
With Cross in My Hand which i try to Keep
And Becoming Sleepless i wait for the day
When all the Scepters will go away.

Author notes

This is The description of My Childhood Nightmares that i tried to Jot Down

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  • SilverButterfly gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    what horrible nightmares!! but there is One who chases away the darkness.. this was scary!!!



    GBY
    SilverButterfly


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 3, 2007

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    Thanks for your entry

    Wow, this is nice. Maybe it is just me but the capital letters through out the poem give me the feeling that this was written using titles of other poems. Weird I guess.

    Happy Halloween
    Tammy


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 25, 2007
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    Good write

    Yes dreams and fears unknown as a child can be most freightening I had a few myself


    • ChinNoy
      October 25, 2007
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      thank you mam i appreciate your time for reading it