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Life Pattern

Defining reflections
Inhabit the murky water

The birth of sheer delicacy
As grows the waning moon

A time for rejuvenation
A chance for tomorrow

Healing the soul
With each intricate dip

As wilted petals
Blossom once more
Her life begins anew

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  • Beautifully written


  • Lactar Wolfgang
    February 26
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    Jenn you rock

    I love your work I am glad I stopped by. I have missed you been away from the site for awhile. Starting to write a little again. I loved the way the picture is painted with your words. my fav. is
    "Healing the soul
    With each intricate dip"

    love it great job hugs and more hugs for you


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 26, 2007
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    Really lovely poem.... such delicate reminder that all is not lost....


  • ChibberMonkey
    October 26, 2007
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    Beautiful, JennJenn.
    It's really nice to see a piece from you again.
    <3