My favourite night is here again
Children run around with glee
Dressed in Halloween costumes
Innocently come a calling on me
Little hands stretched out grasping
Giggling they cry 'Trick or Treat'
I'll give them candy and cookies
So tonight I can taste sweet meat
I'll venture forth when it's darker
Then I won't look too out of place
Appearing from the shadows
They'll scream as I reveal my face
Children are not my usual choice
Too much they kick and bite
But tonight it's just too tempting
To give them a little fright
My usual prey is far too busy
Partying in jubilation,
So what else is a ghoul supposed to do
But feast on the younger generation
I know I shouldn't do it
Eating children, it's just not right
But I promise its only once a year
On Halloween, my favourite night
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very funny and very twisted.LOL!! It nice because no one thinks of the poor ghouls anymore and what they have too suffer...
~~hara
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demented yet amazing
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Thanks for your entry
This is too cute. A ghoul out to get a little treat for him/herself huh. Fatten up with candy and make them taste sweeter huh. lol. Good job with this one.
Happy Halloween
Tammy
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Horrifically funny! Too good!
Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha HA HA HA HO HO!
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Put some periods at the end of your sentences. Otherwise I think this is stellar.
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This is very smiple poem yet it seem to have a mystic to it. I think the word to describe it. I love how you did the ryhming. The last part:
I know I shouldn't do it
Eating children, it's just not right
But I promise its only once a year
On Halloween, my favourite night
I really hope you wrote that as imagition and not from personal experince. LOL! -
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LOL
Thank you!!!
Yes, it is from my dark imagination...
I don't like eating children... not enough meat on them LOL
x Suze x
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I love this piece. It is so true and great. There is just so much to it. Keep up the wonderful penning! Excellent WORK!
Later
Brit Brit
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