Beneath the blood moon
I held your heart
Gripping onto your wound
I could feel you beginning to depart
Don't leave me
For I love you so
You promised we'd always be
Please, Please don't Go
In the shadows
There's your ghost
This life never mattered
Because I loved you most
And now you're gone
Dead
And there's no dawn
I hold this gun to my head
Well?
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this is a good one.. nice, i like the rhyme, the flow, and the subject matter. having someone and losing them. thats a good thing to write about, and these lines so cool, martyrdom at its best hehe..
In the shadows
There's your ghost
This life never mattered
Because I loved you most
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I love this piece. It is so true and great. There is just so much to it. Keep up the wonderful penning! Excellent WORK!
Later
Brit Brit
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