Here in this distant land
Of parts unknown
I grow old and withered
Till God rests my soul
But I know a secret that no one knows
The secret of the howling Wolf
And with each howl the pain grows
I witnessed this one night
Camping out,looking into the majestic stars in the moonlight
A hungry lone Wolf,searching his way,hunting for his life
And there,he saw a site he never have seen before
He witnessed a white dove,in all its majestic glamor
The Wolf has never seen such a beautiful site
He asked me,"Could this be what you humans call love feels like?"
But the beast that the Lord made him,told him to end it's life
He resisted the urge the best he could
Till the hunger drove him insane,like he knew it would
He tore this beautiful creature limb from limb
The sweet blood making red ink marks in the snow
Flowing from his chin
It was a sad site
The Beast killed the only thing he had ever loved
And since that day
As I look now in the stars above
I hear the Wolf's howling pain rise with the moonlight
But I only know
Why the Wolf howls at night
A contest entry
- Wolf Inspiration(Rhyme) by DarkAngel33.
700 points, ended February 24, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great story line, and very nice build up. thanks for the entry and good luck
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effective. a little slow in the beginning but what a great development and closing. dig it !
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Ah, its excellent. Well done on such a simple clean story told well through beautiful words. I would suggest for ease of reading changing the .. double fullstops to commas? But otherwise perfect.
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Ah..I like this story..and its presentation as well......I love this wonderful task you did..well done..and thanks for sharing it..
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a good po
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I love this piece. It is so true and great. There is just so much to it. Keep up the wonderful penning! Excellent WORK!
Later
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