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my seven lines of brilliance.

Seven potential poets
with a twenty-seven minute limit
these are my seven lines of brilliance...

Please take your time to see
See the short beauty of my limited poetry
The beauty is here.
Just a little hard for me to share

WHATchaTHINK???

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  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    October 28, 2007

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    It is seven lines of brilliance! It's a funny, but well written poem. And it's short too so that's a bonus!


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 25, 2007
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    prompt is:

    “Sadness is but a wall between two gardens.”
    ~Kahlil Gibran
    or
    the pic above