Oh please let me go
cause I'm so sick and tired
of the same old worlds
and my perception has long gone
where the words once sparkled in your eyes
well I knew It was wrong
Oh please just fuck the hell away
I'm tired of the things I say
so you used my younger heart
Love the games you play to tare me apart
Oh god your like every other one
wonder why I have a girl
then she wont care for me the same
I want this sudden darkness placed upon my soul
let me rest in laces where it's wrong
How bout you punch me in the face
cause every-time you say I love you that's how it feels
you make the fact that we can never be
flash it before my eyes so I cant see
Just let my heart left your sickened mind float down
Take me to the river and watch this all drown
I need a bridge I swear I wanna jump
the beauty you gave me , you promised me dark
Find it in the heart that I never knew
give me a breath to bury you
Author notes
Im so sick of the men in my life fucking me up- I swear in an inch away for blowing this mother fucking life to peices ...
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Stunning
No words to describe how I feel after reading your amazing write. It's a familiar story and the emotions you describe I have felt many times. However, without these experiences we would not be the people we are today. For what does not kill us makes us stronger
Hanging in there girl.
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Uh oh having problems I see? Want me to tear him a new one? LMAO...Cause I will!!! Anyways...this piece is so wonderful, you can feel and visualize the fight the emotions there in. You want to forget but he refuses to let you men are stubborn that way especially the one I think you are refering to. But you know whats best for you don't let his words consume you because they are only that words.
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Wow! I was on your profile at SW and I decided to click on one of the poems over here. God this is amazing. Men do really suck sometimes. This is packed with emotion, you are so passionate about your writing and it shows in every piece. Loved it
~Joann
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the energy and anger! i love it. the first few lines "Oh please let me go
cause I'm so sick and tired
of the same old worlds" say just how i feel some times with the people and things in lif -
Aww
i know the feeling of men fucking u up. trust me i know thi was an amazing piece of art "Just let my heart left your sickened mind float down" i like that line. men suck thats why i had a gf, -
Hmm...well, I hope you're not mad at me, too? Cause I really enjoy talking to you and all, Blair. But I'm sure you're not mad at me, thoug. It's different with me.
I thought that this showcased a lot of your talent and a lot of emotion, too, so I really enjoyed this and hope that you continue to use this site as well as the other one, too.
Keep up the great work! I look forward to more of your stories and poems in the near future, bud.
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