Last night,

we fed each other lips in a
winter bowl. He creased me in palms; I

could have picked the moon.

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Make me want MORE by Suzanne Dia. 1000 points, ended October 30, 2007, 27 entries
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Suzanne Dia
October 30, 2007

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Love the simple, but somehow complex image of this. I want to pick the moon, too!!!

lol

thanks for your entry
- J.J. Sass
  October 30, 2007
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  Thanks!
Nicolette
October 26, 2007

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I love this - especially the moon line. I once wrote a collab with quietly burning about "taking a bite out of the moon"! Excellent, Stacy.

~ Nicolette
- J.J. Sass
  October 26, 2007
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  I know that you do moon so well, so I love that you love my moon line.
  
  gosh that's alotta love floatin' around lol
rebeka
October 26, 2007
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this is excellent poetry.
every word of this..perfection
- J.J. Sass
  October 26, 2007
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  Thank you.
Abscessed
October 25, 2007
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you are just fabulous Stacy!
- J.J. Sass
  October 25, 2007
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  Thanks Ro!
Yvette Champ
October 25, 2007

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Like the way the title leads directly into the poem,clever crafting,the poem is so,so short yet still has imagery,emotion and originality,it also has the "sigh" factor.Loved it!
- J.J. Sass
  October 25, 2007
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  Thanks so much.
Grunts Girl
October 25, 2007
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wow..
i am captivated by every word
i mean every word
- J.J. Sass
  October 25, 2007
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  Thank you!
Cat
October 25, 2007
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one of the best poems i've read on this site- amazing
- J.J. Sass
  October 25, 2007
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  Thanks M!