Human is the holiest shrine of soul
Wrapped in different bodies
God Himself dwells within.
A contest entry
- Three Line Poems by Amy Meneses.
600 points, ended October 29, 2007, 23 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your BEST short prewrites! by perfectsunset.
550 points, ended April 13, 69 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, this was so powerful
and beautifully crafted.
Speaks volumes in such brevity
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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This is really good. I can see why it got gold, it's very powerful. I'm not very religious, but that does not mean I can't appreciate this for what it is.
Great job and good luck.
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Very, very religiouse...But done in a fancy way I almost like it. Sure your meaning in the poem is strong, and true, yet the ending kinda limits it to yet another god loving poem.
Good luck?
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wow.. a very unique write.. excellent work.. its own little beauty it holds.. fantastic work.. and such a beautiful message conveyed in only three lines.. wow
thanks for entering my contest!
and best of luck!!
your judge,
-Lemon Bee-
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Ok so round #3 of this contest. I am digging into whether or not I believe the poem needs more. In other words, does this poem stand alone wonderfully or does it need more; does it sound complete.
I think you did a great job in this task, “Human is the holiest shrine of soul.” This was wonderful and you stuck to the format without a feeling of transition from one part to the other. I think you did a wonderful job taking this form and making your own with it. I would be surprised if a trophy doesn’t go to you. Good job!
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Body and soul sharing the power of God. Nicely done.
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nice
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