The heart that could never hurt anyone,
but feels so much of their pain.
compassion for even her worst advosary,
never being able to turn her back on anyone.
A love that shall never waver,
for she is unable to stop loving.
A true spirit of forgiveness,
she knows no other way.
She hides her pain and troubles,
deep inside herself.
She does not want you to know,
that she hurts so very deeply.
She secretly wishes to die,
this very moment.
But silently she thinks about,
how and when she will go.
She feels no one will miss her,
that no one would even care.
She knows they will be glad,
when she is no longer there!
A contest entry
- Send Me A Poem by crystallynnbradford.
400 points, ended November 9, 2007, 52 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a great piece of writing, and something I could have related all too well to once upon a time.. Not a great way to feel, but expressed very well
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This was a very good write. I hope you aren't feeling the way you describe in the end. Just always remember I am here if you ever need a friend.
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to love all others' around you and not yourself is enduring hardship on yourself. We all wish Heaven to vanish our mistakes here on Earth faster than we can
sneeze but remember all the lives you touch may be the only love of God that is seen and to give them a blessing only Jesus can do working through you to them.
Try never to give up for you have so much love to offer.
Tamara
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i like this very very much....it was just..wow...thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
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WoW
Hey dear, h r u.
Those words are very strong, very touching...
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Unselfish love?
I know such a thing exists, I readily admit it is not something I am capable of. What inspired this poem?
I can understand that anyone capable of unselfish love could ultimately be self destructive but the last two lines have thrown me:-
'She knows they will be glad,
when she is no longer there!'
Why would they be glad? This is very dark but none the less for that. It's a fascinating poem worthy of many re-reads. Thanks for sharing.
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awwwwww i'm sure someone would always miss this person...someone always misses someone. I used to think nobody would miss me and sometimes I still feel that way and sometimes wish it but I know it's not true. Good job with this beautiful write.
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I love your work. It was beautifully written. Your on the same level I am on. I hope to see some more work from you.
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