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Dance of Blank Verse

[Blank Verse]
"                        "
      !            :                  ,                .
              ,            ,            ,                .
      ,              ;                              !
                    ,

The puncation dance! In a comma, rhythm all of it own
Mr. Semicolon standing so grand
Double dots looking around
What blank verse says, have fun with me
One thing I know is why he wrote
For the love and passion of the written word

Author notes

I have not done this before it my first attempted

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  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    If this is truly a first attempt then I look forward to seeing more from your pen.
    Just that twist in the first line visualising it as a dance. Great thought. Good Luck.


  • rufina caraid gold member
    October 25, 2007

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    What a wonderful up-beat version of Hemingway's Blank Verse. It's interesting you chose to write of the punctuation iteself thatn than to fill in the blanks persay. Thanks for your entry. Von


  • StarEyes
    October 25, 2007

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    B~

    For a first attempt, you made me smile this morning! I think you did fantastic here! I have never attempted anything like this either, but it looks like it might be fun.....

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta