Heart beats in soft sighs,
soul lies parched in your absence;
wishing you were here
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nice senryu
well done!!
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yes ... sigh. I can truly appreciate this poem.
Steve
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A good poem
Nice, i like it dear poet. The sky is the Limit. Keep writing. Good ay
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awesome imagery, metaphors. Keep writing, keep writing! Let us peek some more.
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This is very sad. Sometimes the silent wishes are the ones that hurt the most. Very good. -Wil
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What a soft delicate feel to this with the lingering of the ache that is left wanting your love..
Excellent!
Much Love & Many Blessings~
~Joy
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Beautiful, tender and it really leave a huge image in my mind. The serenity of love and how it can envelope you is a treasure indeed.
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Brilliant penning. 15 words of pure beauty and feel of longing.
~Candy
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The soul may indeed be parched and in need of quenching that only comes from the sense of fulfillment that one finds with another but it is a heart that is full of love that can continue to beat, wish and hope under such conditions. There is a lot of depth to your words here. Good luck in the contest.
JLG
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A wonderfully expressed piece of emotions that drip through your poetic pen within.. Thanks for sharing this short, yet powerful piece. All the best within the contest!
-Timothy
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Thank you for your wonderful comment
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The heart of the lonely does indeed feel parched when it thirsts for just a drop of nourishment from the right vessel. This is beautiful and written in haiku form as well, giving that extra special appeal. Good luck in your contest!
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Thank you for your wonderful comment
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