I know you’ve seen darker days,
I know you’ve harbored some pain,
but inside your gentile like the autumn rain.
So Miss Thang, let me dissolve your disdain;
I could flush your system;
Teach you some wisdom,
all within the court of my kingdom;
Discover for what my throne is known;
Be a part of the legacy, expose your soul
and fulfill your destiny with ecstasy;
I could care less about your past history;
But I would love to solve every last mystery
contained within this lovely Queen Brittany;
Share your feelings unconditionally,
and I’ll share mine likewise;
By surprise it just might open your eyes
to the wonders of the planet,
and excite your spirit until you can’t stand it;
Not to get overly romantic,
but I think ahead and this is how I plan it;
Not to cause confusion, but
before we jump to conclusions,
hand in hand we could stroll slowly
on the path to eternal infusion;
I’ve played the game of love,
and at times I was losing;
Therefore this time it’ll be on terms of my choosing;
That may come off as overly cautious,
but I’m willing to take chances;
I’m just screening out the false romances;
Let’s reflect on that as we exchange glances,
and share an embrace at a
synchronized heartbeats-pace;
When we move forward, perhaps
we’ll arrive at the same place;
Like any other obstacle I face,
I’ll pursue it hard and even give chase;
Rather than a roadblock, this is a welcome wandering,
because I hold no stock in an effortless pondering;
I could analyze all the time that I’ve been squandering,
but I realize I just haven’t found what was corresponding;
Discovering whether or not this match is accurate
is like uncovering love because half of it
is fun, and half of it is passionate;
I hope you like this thus far
because this won’t be the last of it…
Author notes
It's cool to meet someone new you actually like lol
Please tell me what you think
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I love your flow...it's like free style wars or something, but then the content of the poem is so sweet and romantic it gives it an entirely fresh spin. Loved these lines...
"I’m just screening out the false romances;
Let’s reflect on that as we exchange glances,
and share an embrace at a
synchronized heartbeats-pace;"
Nice.
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If the name had been left off this work I would have sworn it was written to me. LOL You are the master of rhyme and flow, and I already know that you know. I hope she gets the message and it makes her grin from ear to ear you swooner you!
Much Love Always ♥
Renee "f
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lol
It most certainly made her grin. I've written quite a few poems like this, but so few of them have actually been directed at someone specific. In this case it was, and it went over well.
Oddly enough, the better I get to know her, the more accurate my poem has become... I wrote this not too long after meeting her and a lot of this was assumption... Weird, huh?
Of course, something like this could have been easily directed to a woman of your caliber. I know your husband thanks god every day
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Queen of Hearts
Sweet dedication and of course the flow is impeccable.. you've seriously mastered flowing poetry..
its romantic and fun and sweet and endearing.. all things i love, the only thing i didn't like was the girls name in it, kinda killed it for me but still a sweet tribute and beautifully written, i like the background that matches with it.
lovely ~ happy 4 u.
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I understand what you mean with being specific with the name... I contemplated not putting it in, but it really would have left a hole in the poem. Besides, I did write it for her to read it after all lol
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