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Dark Sun

Modern Angel
Beautiful girl
Golden hair
Dancing shoes
Kisses and whispers
Melodic laughter
Sun streaked lashes

Modern boy
Fallen Angel
Demon eyes
Shaggy hair
Devil-may-care smirk
Silent conversations
Roguish wink

Moonlit dance floor
Fated eyes meet
Blue on black
Hands touch
Music throbs
Hearts beat
Souls mend
Differences collide
Ignored

Light on Dark
Love erodes Fear
Prejudices melt
Two become one

On the floor
Lay their outer layers

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  • VerminVomit
    April 24, 2008

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    i dont konw what to say...

    i think i like the modern boy more than the mordern angel
    i like the 2nd to last stanza the most
    im adding you to the finalist list
    i just...love it so much, but i dont know what to say about it..