He holds me gently
I shiver in his embrace
He's my dream lover
Whenever I'm asleep
I'm in his arms
I spend my nights in heaven
And live my days in hell
Longing for the darkness
To feel him again
To love him again
To be loved
Night after night
It's always the same
We share surreal passion
Our bodies entwined
Lost in our desires
Knowing only hunger for each other
Then the mood changes
His holds me tighter
A soft kiss, an unspoken promise
And a short sharp pain
As he plunges into my flesh
Feasting on my life
Nearly taking me completely
And then leaving before dawn
Before I awake
But tonight is different
Stopping for a moment
He looks into my eyes
His are ruby red
Mine are dying
'Taste me' he whispers
'Where' I ask
With a razor sharp nail
He draws a red line across his heart
My head falls onto his bloody invite
I lick him, suck him, drink him
He moans, he shudders, he trembles
Pulling me away, he smiles
I wipe his blood from my lips
I never thought he'd taste so sweet
Never thought that in my death
I would finally start to feel alive
Author notes
sensual/erotica
Written by Purplesuze
A contest entry
- Love Poems *Any Kind* by JustBeingDevine.
670 points, ended October 30, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
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Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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"Never thought that in my death
I would finally start to feel alive"
I love those lines! I love how this is both erotica, dark and love. A great mix. Good job! -
this is very very good...thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
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Vampire erotica in disguise. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Had me fooled until the middle of the poem. It was a good transition into the reality of the poem. LOL
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DAAMN
Wow! Deliciously dark! At first I was hesitant of this poem but now! After indulging myself in this lustful deviance.. Its beautiful! Beautifully haunting! My favorite lines are most definately
As he plunges into my flesh
Feasting on my life
Nearly taking me completely
The ending lines
Never thought that in my death
I would finally start to feel alive
Are like the grand finaly in a firework display! I'm all to familiar with this feeling.. Salvation through dreams.. Yes. Wonderful! Thank you for entering! A good start to this contest! Good luck. -
This definately captivated my attention. It seemed innocent at first and then a lust for blood which was a nice touch. My favorite lines were:
"I spend my nights in heaven
And live my days in hell
Longing for the darkness
To feel him again"
This showed the something sensual I asked for, but a step further in the story. Much luck to you -
This is a wonderfully dark poem... penned beautifully... however I'm afraid that it cannot be eligible for judging as it doesn't fit the criteria in my contest... I enjoyed reading this very much
Keep writing
Polly
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Hmmmm, I'm not too fond of erotica, it isn't really my style... This was quite good as erotica goes though, so I'll say well done, thanks for entering and good luck
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Great dark poem. My prompt with a vampire/victim love affair type twist. I like it. Very vivid in imagery and the story is lovely. I wish you well in the contest.
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i hope you get it hon i am honest this was the best poem in this category to me so far thanks for real entertainment good luck to you in the contest
Lil Atl 30319 -
STUNNING!!!
STUNNING WRITING. I LOVE THIS. THIS IS DARK, FOREBODING, THREATENING, SENSUAL, EROTIC. WONDERFUL PIECE OF WRITING. THE IMAGERY IS SUPERB. MORE PLEASE. I SHALL KEEP MY EYE ON YOU.
ALL THE BEST
WAYNE
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Oh Wow
This is fantastic...what a wonderful piece. I loved it! It's so dark and so awesome. Very sensual words here....very good..thank you for entering and good luck!
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