I seek love like water
I empty ancient secrets into
a palace of delicate hearts
A star of purpose
as souls make noises of need
Need to fill reserve of power
Open to only the essence
of understanding
Simple nothings rich in knowledge
does all that it wills
The light of magic is fate
It gathers in the heavens
Sounding together
The seeds listen
Mazes are the minds of babes
Our daughter death
seeks a destination
A dry victory prayer
Winding deeper into Earth
A mighty vessel beyond the Universe
Waiting for
a dew drop
to fall on waiting lips
I seek love like water
Author notes
I forget how to put links to poems on here but it's called 'love hurts' and I'm sure you will be busy for a while, I'll try to figure it out....
A contest entry
- 4:44 - a n y t h i n g by the chase.
900 points, ended October 26, 2007, 45 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your oldest prewrite poems and my 20th contest by stargazer..
650 points, ended April 20, 417 entries
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Comments
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Like it.
Well written...like it.
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I like the title in relation to the poem, and I like the first and last lines. This is very beautiful and the imagery is airy and light.
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This is awesome, Angel! Full of vivid images and lovely words.
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