You give me fever,
hunny.
Hot, heavy panting
against my neck.
Sizzling kisses
all the way down
to my breasts.
[don’t stop please don’t stop]
Tender trails
your fingers leave
against my skin.
Hands grip
my hips
and
[please please don’t stop]
ohhhhhh, hunny,
you give me fever.
Fever when you
please me,
fever when you
tease me…
When your fiery eyes
stare hungrily into mine,
oh, I bout lose my mind.
[take me ohhh take me]
Burning love and
mmm..
I need you so much.
red hot
white hot
oh, hunny,
that’s the spot.
red hot,
white hot,
oh, hunny,
that’s the spot.
intoxicating.
no debationg
[ faster faster faster]
sweat
sweet
wet
heat
red hot
white hot
ohhhHHHH…
Yea, hunny,
that’s the spot.
[Mmm..the Fever]
[Oh, what a lovely way to burn…]
Author notes
Some lines come from the song "You Give Me Fever" by Peggy Lee, once again. lol. Hope this is to your liking, even though as I said a million times before, it's prolly not even close to anything you wanted. lol.
A contest entry
- Lesbian Erotica, Ya'll wanna enter by A-Sky-Lark.
725 points, ended November 23, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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very fast
very intense
very good =)
seej
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I'm adding you to the finalists because I think the beginning is spectacular and it deserves some credit, even tho I wasn't a fan of your ending.
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