How you miss something that was never there?
Like an aching feeling,
Craving for something,
You never knew was there?
Emotionally attached to something already gone,
Never had the chance to love it,
To try and care for it,
Hold it close.
Would have destroyed so many lives,
But made two so very happy,
How do you have this power?
When you were never really there?
How did I not know,
Right there with me,
Part of me for a time,
And I never knew.
Clinging onto something already lost,
Tears spilt for the thoughts of,
Could have been, would have been,
How things should have been.
It was the right thing,
Yet it feels so wrong,
Leaving me feeling empty inside,
Like I'm missing part of myself.
Imprinted upon my mind forever,
A lost wish to us both,
I'll dream and think of you,
But you won't be able to of me.
Hardly had a chance to live,
Not even fully there,
Like a scar,
Just this one won't heal.
Feeling empty,
Feeling like somethings missing,
Missing that feel of you,
Missing what was never there...
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personal piece to me...
please don't rip to pieces, although any ideas to help to imagery are welcome... i found myself struggling for different words...
sky xxx
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amazing as always.
hey sis.
i know this feeling more now then i ever have in my life.
so i know what you mean.
its a lovely piece.
hold in there babe.
i love you.
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thanks for the support as always sis, although i dont kn ow if you totally get what i mean in this... but alas!!!!
great to have you back, we must track down the family. lmao.
i love ya too
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perhaps not. but a poem can be portrayed many ways, and it will still never mean the same to someone else as it does to that of who wrote it.
its still really good.
=]
i love you.
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I could really feel this poem
"Clinging onto something already lost,
Tears spilt for the thoughts of,
Could have been, would have been,
How things should have been."
That has to be the most felt line for me. You have a way with words I really like this I think a lot of people can relate to it good work on this. I wouldn't change a thing girl you got a good piece right here. XD
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I understand exactly where you coming from, sometimes you can feel the connection from a far, but lose that one chance to make real, true story, i saw that girl in the train, i notice that she was looking at me when she was about to get off the train, she look at me and i look at her we smile, she got out of the train, i got caught in the moment, for tree months i was at that station at the same time looking to see her again, never happen.
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I like this one. It's nice how you use the poetry to help you through the struggle. I can tell it was written with true emotion. Very, very nice!
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these lines really hit me in the gut...
'I'll dream and think of you,
But you won't be able to of me'
those words tell me of a loss... perhaps an unborn child. if this is so I'm sorry for your loss.
on reading your poem again I pulled the same feeling of loss from it.
I haven't any suggestions because I believe personal writes should be left as they are.
every word is soaked with sadness and grief. I hope things will get better for you soon.
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