Survival of the fittest one that's how our society works,
So that is why we feel today that every thing is coming undone.
The government has done its job now it is up to the individual quarks
The people must work in this world today not just sit back and have some fun.
When one thing fails in our lives today it causes a domino effect,
So when something does not go as we plan it is all just a big defect.
Some people work hard in life to achieve what they want,
While others sit back like sloths in July and ride the coat-tails of the go-getter's.
They don't worry about every day problems and go on a afternoon jaunt,
While the occasional high flier goes and attacks life like a home-run-hitter.
This is life as we know it,
It is sad but true.
it is based on people that wont take the bait,
or people that take their cue.
A contest entry
- Tell me what you're feeling! by TwiztidMaggot.
600 points, ended November 3, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's up to you by Marctheman.
700 points, ended November 26, 2007, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your Green Trophies into Bronze, Silver or Gold (2) by FloridaGatorQueen.
600 points, ended July 17, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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This poem is full of so much truth. Especially the part about the government. I totally agree! Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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this poem is so true! very nice!
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wow. this is really good. I like the way you wrote it. Keep up your amazing work! good luck, and thanks for the entry!!!!!
Crimson
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