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Hitler

"Hitler"

SIEG HEIL! Supermen: Blond hair, blue eyes,
Gene pool specimens, perfection, race, purity.
Skin heads, racist, hatrid; Fick dich!
Yet still some believe

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  • rufina caraid gold member
    October 25, 2007
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    This one is certainly interesting as it came at me as a broadside, never expecting Hitler as a topic, but nevertheless it's an unusual take on Hemingways perversity.  Your final line speaks volumes and one has to ask Why? Thank you for your entry   Von


  • LittleAnn
    October 25, 2007

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    Wow, this is different... but interesting, I like it.

    It's "heil", not "hiel"
    and "fich" --> "fick"


    Thanks for sharing!
    Keep on writing!
    Annie