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Strewth!  00:23, and I see this load of dots and dashes.
Perhaps it's a joke, or a bet, some weird rite, or  literary flashes.
I don't know, and I guess you don't either; I wonder if anyone will tell either of us!
Lots of space around them for me to fill, OK done that no big fuss

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  • earthstar
    October 25, 2007

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    very well done. I like how you made it short and sweet. Know it raised my curious George in me and need to do some research. I admire Ernest Hemingway. Good luck on the contest.


    • gordon the gopher
      November 3, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and writing. This guy George sounds interesting would I enjoy meeting him?
      GG


  • rufina caraid gold member
    October 24, 2007

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    Thanks for being the first entrant into this, dare I say 'unusual' contest.  dots and dashed there are a'plenty but you have certainly managed to fill in the spaces and made me smile too.      Von


    • gordon the gopher
      November 3, 2007
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      Making somebody smile is a grand idea. I'm glad you feel I managed it with this piece.
      GG