Standing in the street
I thought I heard a rustle behind me
But I guess it's just the wind
Wrapping my coat around me tighter
Crunch goes the leaves
But I guess it's just the wind
I thought that you said you would stand beside me
Love me forever
But I guess it's just the wind
Is that you behind me?
Are you living up to your promise?
But I guess it's just the wind
I thought I heard you behind me
A tear trickles down my cheek
I thought you said forever
But I guess it's just the wind
I guess it's just the wind
Author notes
I thought of this at soccer practice...
What'd d'ya say?
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What'd d'ya say <--huh?
Anyway, this made my eyes water (although I'm not entirely sure why) I think you could use one of those ... things (ellipses? idk) somewhere near the end. This was really sweet and relatable and only slightly corny. Keep writing!
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Very deep man i really liked it. and at soccer pratice wow very good. I give it
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NIIIICE
Wow... thats deep. Just so you know, I know you! Im Emma, remember? Ask Kathryn if you forget.
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