at thirty-five
she had them pierced
for posterity,
chain-link fencing
dangling between-
suitable habitat
for refugee-nipples,
steadily migrating
south
for winter sun.
Author notes
Words: 25
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A contest entry
- nipples- 2 hours- approximately by Cat.
500 points, ended October 25, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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What can I say except bloody awesome . . . the aging process with a deft poetic twist . . . loved it!!!!
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Oh, this isn't pretty... is it? lol. It's like a breast tatoo, a teeny rose can turn into a very long stemmed one~ hehehe.
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yeah- now, once i read the smoke signals.. jesus..
whaaa.. on the migrating south boobies..
good poem
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LOL
whats with all these nipple contests?
thats funny.
&& this is great.
xx
♥
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lol cute
Not much more to be said.. i think lol
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ROFLMAO.... HELL YEAH!! it's all downhill....
i had my nose pierced when i was 40.... lolol
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oh and you know -
one of these days you'll have to read some of your poetry to me
I bet it's twice as beautiful out loud.
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*Ahem* Well ... that would be easier if 'some' people were not out in the evening picking up tvs
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so, is it true?
lol
excellent
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Is it true .. is it true ... is it true???!!
Voyeur
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I'm wondering if this is true
ahem
I LOVE this
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*lol*
Is it true???!! ... I forget 
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you're a tease
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Love this,25 words that provoke thought and provide imagery and what imagery it is!!!Kudos.
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Wow...
this is WELL DONE...
25 words...you have lines of extreme brilliance here.
this begs for tin...it is worthy indeed!
Blessings! Tammy
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Well done on the prompt..Like your take..All the best!
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