I wish I knew
What you think about each day.
My feelings grew
As you simply thought away.
When our eyes meet,
I can't help but lose my heart.
It's no mean feat,
Breaking our gaze apart.
Our hands, they touch;
I am painfully aware.
My will fails such,
For I can't control my heart's affair.
I fell so hard
Into feelings for one who
Won't disregard
My feelings, for they feel, too.
You are my strength--
My life, my heart, my best friend.
You won't leave me;
Each other we always defend.
I'd die for you
No matter what, forever.
We can pull through--
Join in my heart's endeavor.
Author notes
This is the option (for the contest) where you write about the person you have a crush on.
A contest entry
- Sorry I Broke It by DeadlyTurnip.
900 points, ended November 4, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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very good thanks for entering
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now i think i shall go pull my write from this contest because i do not stand a chance against this. thank you for sharing this with me tonight and i wish you the best of luck in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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This was beautiful! absolutely fabulous and thanks for the comment! =]
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First entry!! Woot! Thank you so much for entering. I loved your title & last line use, I tend to do that in a bunch of my poems as well. Your rhyme scheme was very nice. Keep writing.
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