To take the innocence of a child,
you should be sentenced to hell,
and condemned a pedafile,
to impose such mental problems on a kid,
you can't be reconciled,
you filthy nasty FUCK,
AND YOU CAN'T EVEN SAY YOU WERE DRUNK,
no excuse, for child abuse,
and molestation,
what kind of baggage causes that sexual frustration,
to fuck a child up with that kind of demonstration,
on how to be an adult,
so the kid grows up while spiraling out of control,
letting drugs take their toll,
on a life not ment to be spoiled,
left in toil,
with a mother hooked on meth,
worrying herself to death,
wondering if she'll be there,
for her mother's last breath,
before she finally rests.
Author notes
Option 1
I HATE MY GRANDPARENTS FOR WHAT THEY DID TO ME!!!!!
Yeah I had a fucked up life till I moved away from cali....and even here I've had horrible shit happen to me....
Written May 22nd, 2006
A contest entry
- ROUNDS CONTEST! by ExpectingMommy18.
700 points, ended November 1, 2007, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - HATE by lesbian-in-love.
565 points, ended November 5, 2007, 47 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Extreamly thought provoking.
You have done a remarkable poem here the poem fits the title very well. Every word is so filled with truth and reality that it is extreamly compelling to read. I wish that there was a way to stop the abuse that children have to go through no matter what kind it is. There is nothing so evil as what is being done to the innocent children. You have had such a hard life hopefully you will find through your writing a way to bring all the hurt out of tour mind and soul so as to one day heal. I know that it is gut wrenching to even think about, but once you come to terms with it and then spend your time and effort being there for others that need someone to listen to them you will have found yourself and be a much healthier and happier person. I want all the best for you, and I can certainly see why you were awarded a trophy in this contest. Well done poet.
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chilling
That is so fucked up. How come it happens so much? How do older people seek pleasure and power fufillment through abusing an innocent child?
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger, or it can defeat you if you let it. An abused child is still innocent.
Anyway, about the poem, it's captivating and it keeps you interested all the way through. Especially with the words you chose to put together and how they rhyme in a way I never would have thought of myself.
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Oh wow. First I must say I am sorry to hear about this. This is just a very emotional write. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.
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This hit home for me in so many ways---people who take the innocence of a child should have those parts chopped off or they should get the death penalty and that's just the way I feel about it. Continue to let our your emotions thru writing---it helps, it really does.
My support,
LB
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oh my gosh this really hits home because i was molested by my unlce and his wife tried saying he was drunk.when i read that in your poem i froze,the poem itself was great.im sorry you had to go through the same thing,i hope you can finally heal.good to you for letting it out instead of keeping it bottled in.
thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest! -
I feel for you you. I know from where you are coming from. I myself am a survivor of incest. If you notice I said I am a survivor and not victim. You too can eventually make such a statement as long as you don't let it rule your life. I love the poem, but I would change the font color or the background. It is very hard to read it.
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