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Meditation 11 (beginner)


beginner



I begin
to sit
awake and straight

eyes half shut
with
unfocused gaze

smoke rings rise
then go away

troubled thoughts
invade within
so
I rock and sway

Re-Set my heart
and
begin again

I remember
always
I am a beginner
and
that it

Is

always
Okay to

begin again




       ~r.


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© October 24, 2007 R. Braley
      (astralshepherd)


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  • JustBreathe gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    "troubled thoughts
    invade within
    so
    I rock and sway

    Re-Set my heart
    and
    begin again"

    A beautiful write! The chance to begin again. Every new days gives us that opportunity ... to see/do things differently. Such a simple thought, but so deep in meaning. I for one am grateful for new beginnings.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 25, 2007
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    Profound, radical, good


  • Sheer Poetry
    October 25, 2007
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    another beauty. simplicity becomes you. you words captivate your audience.


  • rhondasail
    October 24, 2007
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    Ah, yes, "Re-Set my heart and begin again", so true, so true, and it IS always ok to begin again...may I please have some more of these wonderful meditations?.....they are like a quick contemplation before bed(I am reading before I sleep). Peace to you, Shepherd. Rhonda


  • HeavenonEarth
    October 24, 2007

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    I love this richard I hope that we will see more of these posted. I think this is perfect for anyone at any time. I look at them as reflective moments of a mini meditation..
    Thank you
    Blessings~
    ~Joy

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