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Life

It’s like being on the other side of the straw
There’s this magical feeling of pressure all around you
Where nothing can get to you
Shaken
Stirred
Bubbled
And
Poked
But nothing really can hold you
Until all of a sudden there’s this all consuming
Thrust
Of pressure that drags you away
Takes you from that wonderful pressure
Shakes you
Stirs you
Pops you
And
Attacks every inch
So that everything has a piece of you
And there’s nothing left of you
For you

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  • ecrivain01
    November 29, 2007
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    Amazing ...

    I know that feeling. Good job on this.