The sea is every color
land does seek;
white capped,
lavender blue,
connecting
at green.
A contest entry
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390 points, ended December 13, 2007, 21 entries
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very beautiful and poetic (duh)
love the sound of the words as you can read them out, they flow nicely and smoothly together. -
beautifully composed! love the imagery - very strong!
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Thank you; Happy New Year
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Nice
This was a light, easy flowing look at the sea. It gives the reader a new perspective of the sea. I think the wording, although concise, was appropriate and effective. Well done.
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The sea, though beautiful in all it's glory, is also one of the most mysterious and actually frightening parts of nature. A lot like the forces of storms. Interesting to look at, but if you don't know what you're doing... watch out. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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beautiful
great description. great fealing. can even smell you sea
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Beautiful write and wonderful imagery. Yes, the sea can be many different colors and is very beautiful. Keep writing.
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