Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Nothing will keep me away from you

Over every mountain I will climb
To feel your skin brush next to mine
Through fire, water, wind and rain
Just to hear your voice again
I'll keep the secret in my heart
Of which noone will be a part
Just you and me there together
Tied unto this beautiful teather
Never will I let you go
Simply because I love you so

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • whatever666
    April 13, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    love is amazing

    i love the love you show in the poem, i think noone should be no one though, but other then that no errors. great job and thanks for entering


  • ml12
    April 6, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    You present such a deep love well. The form is concise with good repetition which in turn makes it flow really well. Good luck in the contest