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Mistakes

The crimson skies don't burn so bright

When the cold embrace of death brings flight

To imaginary thing that call to fight
In a once known land now dead with blight

 

Begging for comfort with inadiquet verse,

Fighting for our lives within the back of a hearse

Vampiric feasts upon a tablet's curse
To bring the silence to the innocents' purse

 

Beckoning shadow, beckoning Sun

Both to destroy us one-by-one

To be unforgiven at the end of a gun

Or remain still forgotten from mistakes now rerun

 

To live and let live, to die and let die

Forever be grounded with no chance to fly

Our faults left in stone so we cannot apply

An attempt to correct them: our darkest of lies

Author notes

A reflection on the future of humanity and our world when all is said and done

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  • xXFatalxDreamzXx
    November 16, 2007

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    Another great write! The rhyming was really great as well as the imagery you have created in this piece!


    • Priest Winter
      November 16, 2007
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      Thank. I only write down what my soul sees. Just hoping people will look at things at a different perspective other than a blind one. :]