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Want To

I want your arms around me
I want to gaze into your eyes
I want to hold your hand
I want you to hold mine
I want to hear your heart beating
I want to dance with you under the moon and stars
I want to feel your kiss
I want to get lost in your embrace
I want to ignore the world
I want to block out everyone's criticism
I want to lay beside you
If only for a moment.

Author notes

[♥♥] option 8

A contest entry

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  • craftyangel43
    April 28, 2008
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    Very beautifully written and heartfelt. I loved it.
    crafty


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    November 6, 2007
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    I read this and truly loved it.


  • ckwriter69
    November 2, 2007

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    You show a lot of expressions of love with this write. I'm a fan of using repeating like you have and it is very heartfelt and meaningful. I hope the person it is directed to gets to read it. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

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