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Dream Come True

He touched my cheek
I laid my hand on his
confused
but pleased
I open my mouth a little
and let out a soft sigh
not or borment
but of happiness and relief
he moved closer
our knees touched slightly
he moves in for our first kiss
leaning in a bit
to show him I truly want this
I close my eyes
and it happens
his lips are warm
and so soft
I'm surprised it feels so nice
we part from each other slowly
I open my eyes
to see his eyes full of love
scanning his facial expressions
he wants more
so do I
lifting my hand
I caress his cheek
smiling
he closes his eyes
and now I lead him into a second
longer kiss
tender and warmer
its better then I could have ever imaged

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WarmHeartedGeisha16 (Lorissa) AP Cuzin
I hope I can enter cuz, if not just delete the poem out, I wont be hurt or mad
10/24/07 1:38 pm

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  • hypnorocker
    October 24, 2007
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    lovely thoughts...

    glad to see you exploring those corners of that side.... its such an interesting place i find.... anyway love the tone you've set here, the curious yet not too hasty to get to these things that are at first so amazing and so wonderful.... have fun finding new places and experiences...


  • leslielovesthomas
    October 24, 2007
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    Wow!
    So sweet!
    Sure you can enter!!
    Good luck
    Leslie