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Day Of Destiny (Part II)

Tis but a dream...

And yet here I lie doused in perspiration

Beneath the eyes of my steed near an exuberant stream

 

Despite the desire to mount, I endured hesitation

 

To thy feet I rose unto the furtile earth to gaze in the ether's gleam

 

Amongst the omninous clouds fell an evanescent sun

 

Rain. Tears of Heaven came down to greet thee

 

Swiftly, I raise thy sword foward to Troy; the wait is quite done

 

I look to my noble beast and mount as it neighs proudly

 

Like a man possessed I raced beyond the mountaineous land

 

Pounding cuirass in one hand and raising thy sword in the other

 

Ere hearing a voice sounding trite, yet bland

 

T'was quite not to be mistaken as there was not such another

 

Perhaps the being in that dream...no I may be mistaken

 

I may not be well in mind, and yet this voice...

 

And so I strode toward the sound, however shaken

 

Preserving thy dignity ere insanity may rejoice

 

 

 

 

 



 

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 25, 2007
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    Excellent poem Great imagery Keep up the good writes