Peace rises as the East
bright as the morning sun
Rolling over a sleepwalking world
Author notes
Line#1 Abstraction plus verb, plus place
Line #2 Clothe the abstraction
Line #3 Summarizes the action
A contest entry
- Three Line Poems by Amy Meneses.
600 points, ended October 29, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This doesn't follow the format, please read the definitions I provided and re-submit.
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thanks
made a change, pls let me know...PK
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Great work here, my friend - and I love the way this poem progressed, as well as all the poetic devices you've applied in just three lines. Such wonderful visiuals here.
~ Nicolette
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good
short but great poem!! you did a great and wonderful job!!!!! keep up the great work!
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