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Scent of a Flower

Fragrances fluorish in fertile fields,
A collective collaboration of candy color,
And hide when hit by heaven's hydrosphere.

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  • Layne
    November 13, 2007

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    THis was simply AMAZING, there could have been no lines better than the 3 you chose. I dont think I would have the talent to be limited to only 3 lines yet have an outcome as you do-"A collective collaboration of candy color,"-this was beautiful- you should have won the gold on this one


  • checkmate
    October 29, 2007
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    wow. this was amazing. the alliteration was awesome, and it's obvious there has been a lot of thought put into this piece. The structure was great too, and I love how you captured something so beautiful.

    simply amazing..best of the luck in the contest!


  • TwilightDazzles
    October 24, 2007

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    I absolutely adore the alliteration in this!! I like this a lot...just wow! Best wishes in the contest


  • Amy Meneses
    October 24, 2007
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    interesting use of alliteration. :-)Nice twist to the form.