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My Dear Angel

My Angel has hung himself
He wrapped his halo around his throat
And pulled his feathers from his wings
My image of perfection has been tainted by his blood
He has been his own ending
His beautiful face has becom that of a demon
Those last few tears become diamonds
Worthless, as they hit and shatter on the ground
Like his beautiful body
So helpless and broken
That body that once brought comfort and warmth to me
The shreds of his white robe burn black as they hit the ground
As unholy as the one who wore them

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  • Allie-na-na
    October 25, 2007
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    this is absolutely amazing!


  • neverseenfor
    October 25, 2007
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    wow that was great . i really liked it


  • Shikamaru-Nara
    October 24, 2007

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    Wow.

    Simply, wow.

    I loved this. This was such a,

    Fantastic Write!

    I loved every bit of it. What if I may ask, inspired you to write this wonderful masterpiece?


    • LittleRazorBlade
      October 24, 2007

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      My friend, he did something that I couldn't believe I remember I was so mad when I found out. I just wrote it on a whim. Thanks for the comment I really apperciate it.