Destiny lounges on his throne
His laughter echoes
As he charts our attempts finalizing our Journey
A contest entry
- Three Line Poems by Amy Meneses.
600 points, ended October 29, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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OH I did like this very much. You have given life to destiny. Well done my friend. Good luck in this contest. ~Pamela
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interesting. I don't know about the third line being indented. I kind of takes away from the form. It's kind of like, technically three since the fourth "line" is indented but it reads like four. The poem is excellent though. This will be a tough debate. hehe
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