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Creation

Poets analyse twisted sentences
in a poem of love..lust
want to transform dead in lively life.

Author notes

Spiritualangel

Three lines Poem

Line#1 Abstraction plus verb, plus place
Line #2 Clothe the abstraction
Line #3 Summarizes the action


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  • Amy Meneses
    October 24, 2007

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    !nteresting! I like the origionality and the way you somewhat bend the rules yet it still works and fits. Good luck with the poem