Lost but not forgotten,
To you i can compare nothing,
Nephew i keep you in my heart,
R When it beats for you it flies off the chart,
. From my memory you will never part,
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. There are som things in life i can't hold on to, they slip,
P but with i won't ever loose grip,
In case I don't meet you again,
Know that you're a soldier among men,
our connection will never end, Amen.
A contest entry
- #75 Short Prayers by daviscth.
300 points, ended May 28, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I'm sorry for your loss. It made me think how much I value my nieces and nephews although the relationship is not really demonstrative and I don't see them often. It would be heartbreaking if one of them were to die.
I hope you do see Gerald again.
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This is a beautiful poem prayer for your nephew. Thank you so much for posting it in my contest.
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Jesus.. thats beautiful dom<3!!
i really love it!!.. its pure emotional and passionate and all!!!
Nephew i keep you in my heart,
When it beats for you it flies off the chart,..
beautiful lines...
its such an easy poem to relate to..
see your such a good writer...!!!
G.A.R.. is smiling down on ye dom.. lookin after ye.. n ur family.. remember this!!!
..xo!!!
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wow this is sad but a great write
awesomeness
*high five*
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thats good i liked it alot keep writting
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thanx crazy!
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